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謝謝!!1. Jesus came to this world as a teacher、a prophet、a savior

he taught people not to overemphasize the Torah

because even though the Jewish Torah contained the 613 commandments

but still could not cover all the contingencies in life. 2.Jesus took his twelve disciples with him to go to every villages and cities of the Judea and Galilee to teach and preach. In the beginning

the twelve disciples learned from Jesus by memorizing everything that Jesus did and said

they didn

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